Meng Haoran — In the Qin country, feeling autumn come while staying with the priest Yuan

In the Qin country, feeling autumn come while staying with the priest Yuan

Meng Haoran

691-740 CE
(translated by William P. Coleman)

I once wished a single hill to lie upon,
but three ways I made myself miserable, lacking money.

Being in the north was not what I wanted;
I think of my teacher in the eastern forest.

There’s yellow gold in the embers of burning cassia wood;
my firm intentions have run weak, one-by-one, with the years.

The sunlight turns to dusk and a cool wind comes;
I hear the cicada, but it only increases my grief.

Chinese Poems I found the Chinese text and an English translation of this poem — along with the word-by-word literal translation I used to create this one — at Chinese Poems.

Tang Shi -- 300 Tang Poems, from Wengu -- Chinese Classics and Poems Also at the website Tang Shi — 300 Tang Poems, from Wengu — Chinese Classics and Poems.

The grammar of Chinese allows poets to leave interpretive choices open, and it’s an unattainable ideal of translating to bring out possibilities without closing others. I try to use my sense of English to at least intrigue you. If I’ve succeeded, it’s best — even if you don’t know Chinese, which I don’t either — to follow up at the source I cite above and see the original word-by-word translation from which I worked. It’ll be richer than what I’ve given you. To understand the poem best, try to construct your own translation.


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